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mjf1947

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El Circo de Ninos
« on: October 04, 2018, 01:17:34 PM »
Hi,

It's been a few months since I posted .....  :'( so.

I went back to work on my circus project.   I did some work on the first movement.  :o

Some feedback would be nice.  ;D

This is a work in progress.  There are 2 more sections and a return to the opening theme.

Mark

PS: Please don't comment on engraving issues as yet.  :-X
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Re: El Circo de Ninos
« Reply #1 on: October 12, 2018, 06:36:37 AM »
Mark, your piece reminds me of Rota/Fellini musics and I look forward to seeing whether you'll develop it  in that manner with plenty of whim and variation or in a more solemn concert piece fashion.

Very nice start, IMO :)

Reha

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Re: El Circo de Ninos
« Reply #2 on: Yesterday at 09:08:10 PM »
Mark, that is a nice start for your Circo de Ninos piece...it has a carnival flavor to be sure. I'm looking forward to hearing the rest of the work.

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Re: El Circo de Ninos
« Reply #3 on: Today at 06:09:46 AM »
Nice.

I like that while on one level it does invoke the images of a carnival-like atmosphere, the slippery chromatics imply (at least to me) that something else might potentially be going on.


I look forward to more of the piece.
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Re: El Circo de Ninos
« Reply #4 on: Today at 08:59:01 AM »
Yup, nice carnival flavor, Mark! There is great potential to develop this piece in a lot of ways. Where do you intend to go with it? One suggestion--I think the piece drags a bit, so make the tempo faster--you could make the 3/4 section not in three, but almost in one.